We have have been looking at how to use a dictionary and how we can edit and improve our work from The Sound Collector. We then used our purple pen to find exciting vocabulary and out it in to context as a class.

Can you improve this opening line from the first stanza?

The laughing of the children

Can you think of an onomatopoeia?

 

Carefully assessing our work!

How can we uplevel our work?

Double checking our vocabulary to edit and improve

Iting





Miss Marshall

Class 8 teacher. Here to inspire the next generation!

2 Comments

Mcfinley · 24th March 2019 at 12:43 pm

I liked writing poems especially by Roger, also thanks for the special write.

Mcfinley · 8th April 2019 at 2:38 pm

i loved it Miss Marshall i am at Milton Kenyes at the minite thank you Miss for the special write i wish we were doing partly cloudy.

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